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Storytime Blog Hop - February 2024 - A Whole New World

Happy End of February!

Time for our blog hop - flash fiction (under 1k words) from around the world. This time, the basic story concept has been nagging at me for a couple years, and if I get around to it, I’ll expand it out to something longer (but other stories are in the queue first).

Enjoy! And don’t forget to scroll down to the bottom for links to the other stories in the blog hop..


A Whole New World

I blinked, rubbed my eyes, looked again. The body on the worn carpet did not do me the favor of becoming any more human.

“What is this?”

“Dead body.”

I gave him my not amused glare. “No shit.”

“There are more things in heaven—”

“Do not quote Shakespeare at me. In public.” More in a hallway than in true public, but— A grin stole my mouth. “Someone might overhear you and get the wrong idea… that cops can be educated. Dare I say… ”

Smart?” He snorted, the corners of his eyes squinting as he held back his own smile.

“Don’t laugh either.”

“Not while standing over a dead body?”

“Public perception,” I reminded him, cheating a glance toward the front room where more and more people were arriving. “Dumb, heartless bastards.”

“Yeah.” He sobered. Stared back down at the body. “So…?”

“Right.” I let my eyes focus beyond the body, scan the room. “Could be an elaborate prank.”

“Could be. Except for—” He jerked one thumb, indicating the Hispanic woman currently sobbing hysterically at the patrol officer and everyone else in the living room. As her family gathered around her, they seemed to catch her hysteria. I’d happily deal with the dead body rather than the family.

Not that I blamed her— if she’d seen what I saw.

And what I saw…

The victim, sprawled on her back between the bed and the door, in the only empty floor space. We’d hit the body with the door, forcing it open enough to see the victim was dead. And big, bigger than me, bigger than my partner, and he wasn’t short. Top half— woman, with a blue tint to her hair and bluer skin than would be accounted for by death. Bottom half— fins and scales.

I looked past the elephant-fish in the room. Small desk in one corner, the top overflowing with papers and leftovers from last night— a local Peruvian place to die for.

Well, hopefully not.

Neatly made bed and on top of the blanket, a veritable bucket of makeup, some of it open. Smudges of foundation on the victim’s face and fingers.

She’d been killed while making herself look more human.

I strangled the rising sympathy before it got past my breastbone. Feelings could come later, when I was alone and safe. Now, though— “Isn’t there some rule? About hiding from the humans?”

“Sure.” He winced. “I mean, I’m sure there must be, or they— we would have seen more of them. Before now.”

Now I turned my tell me the truth look on my partner. Let it dwell. He was tall and thin, pale with dark hair, but that didn’t necessarily mean anything. In my line of work, leaning on stereotypes could get me killed. I murmured, “You got a call before Dispatch did. Anything you want to tell me?”

He had some resistance, but the longer I waited without speaking, the more he sweated, and the more he sweated, the more his mouth opened and closed, biting back words, and then— “I need your help. I don’t have the training for this.”

“Yet.” After all, I was training him.

He nodded. Looked relieved I hadn’t demanded to know what he was. “Yet. But these murders are happening now—”

“Murders. Plural.”

“Yeah.” His shoulders hunched. “Yeah, now. Three so far.”

“Same M.O.?”

“We covered up the first two.” Now he sniffed as if he hadn’t agreed with someone else’s decision— then wrinkled his nose and covered his mouth, regret at sucking in a giant whiff of death. “I’ve done what I could. Questioned everyone who knew the victims. But I’m obviously missing something, because—” he waved toward the newest body.

My gaze went back to the tail. “A real, live… er, dead, mermaid,” I breathed. “But why was she living on land?”

He shrugged. “Allergic to water.”

“Sorry, what?”

“It happens in about ten percent of the nereid population.” He started to shove his hands in his pockets, reconsidered, let his arms hang awkwardly at his sides. “They get rashes and their scales fall off in patches. It’s a whole thing. So they live on land and only get wet once a day in the shower, and everyone’s happy.”

“Obviously not everyone.” I squatted, examined the ligature mark on her neck. “What did they strangle you with, huh?” The mark had a faint pattern to it. If I could just make it out—

“So, you’ll help?”

I looked up at my newbie detective partner and realized two things— first, I’d twisted my neck at such an awkward angle it felt like a pulled muscle; and second, he loomed a little more than I liked.

Maybe that was a clue to his… race? species?

Either way, goosebumps ran over my skin. I stood back up and took a step away, carefully skirting the body and a paper on the floor. That gave me enough distance so his loom wasn’t quite so obvious. “Of course I’m going to help.” I snorted. “She was obviously sentient. Those are bank statements, and her landlord out there said she was quiet and kept to herself. Went to work, paid rent on time. More or less—” another glance at the tail— “exactly the kind of person I want living in my city.”

He raised his eyebrows.

I squared my shoulders. “I’ve seen weirder stuff on a Friday night in the bad parts of town. And I’m not letting a serial killing have their way in my city.”

He sagged a little. “Oh thank gods.”

“After, though, you owe me a drink. And a story.”


Storytime Blog Hop - January 2023 - Fiddle of Gold

Y’all, it’s 2023 already! I’m starting to feel like my grandparents… “time goes so fast…”

BUT - it’s that time again! Time for me to share free flash fiction from around the world. I hope you enjoy my story and please scroll to the bottom for the links for other stories.


Fiddle of Gold

The first time I tried to sell the devil’s fiddle of gold, I was broke and desperate.

You see, being the best durned fiddle player alive isn’t worth much if everyone knows you’ve sold your soul, and they see through the lie that you haven’t because you can’t get pregnant and, worse than that, your hair doesn’t go gray and you move like a girl when you ought to be an old lady.

So I left that small town with the little I’d saved and traveled as far as I could go and when the money ran out and no one knew my name, I sold that fiddle for a meal and a place to sleep.

And during the night, the two-bedroom shack burned to the ground and the man who’d taken the fiddle cursed at me standing there in the blaze without burning, and threw the fiddle at me so hard it bruised me where it hit.

And I ran away until my legs gave out and I cursed the devil and his fiddle and my own pride.

 

The second time I tried to sell the devil’s fiddle of gold, I was rich and famous and living under a different name in a big city and still looking as young as I had a century before.

You see, I thought being a big city girl would protect me this time and I fell in love and thought maybe if I got rid of that fiddle I could finally grow old with my beloved.

So I took it to the most powerful man in the city and offered it to him for a dollar and then watched the greed take him. He hit me and took the fiddle from my fingers and threw me out into the street, and then he fell down after me and broke his neck and they accused me of killing him.

So I took my fiddle and the clothes I had on and the money I had in my underthings and ran away again as fast as my feet and a good horse could take me, and they accused me of stealing that horse too, though I bought it fair and square. And I had to start all over again with a damned fiddle and another name, and I cursed myself more than I cursed the devil that time, but I still cursed my own pride worst of all, and for a long time after.

 

The third time I was smarter—I didn’t try to sell the fiddle of gold, nor show it off to the wrong person. I heard of a boy named Johnny who thought he was the best fiddle player in the world, and I made my way to Georgia to challenge him for the title.

But I left my rosin behind, and I walked on foot instead of taking my fancy, new-fangled automobile, and I didn’t sleep more than an hour at a time, and I didn’t eat at all, because I meant to challenge Johnny to play better than me, and I meant to lose.

So my guts cramped and my knees shook and ghosts haunted me by the time I stepped up on the porch at Johnny’s house in the far end of the holler, and I challenged Johnny to play better than me and promised him the fiddle if he did, and still when it was my turn to play, my foolish pride made me play as best I could, sore and hungry and delirious, and I almost won him anyway.

But he sicked his blue-tick hound on me partway through, and that gave me just enough reason to drop my bow, then pick it up, and finish playing.

I didn’t much complain.

I gave him the fiddle made of gold and I walked away, feeling the tattered bits of my soul wrap around me for the first time since I’d made my own wager with the devil. And I’d never given him my true name so I went home and lived the life I wanted while he called me a devil and told everyone he was the best that had ever been.


New Book, New Series: LOST PRIESTESS coming in December

Have I shared this cover with you? I can’t remember. But I’m so in love with it. I actually purchased another cover for this book and then HAD to buy this one instead… it’s like the artist reached inside my brain to get my story….

See for yourself:

I love this cover!

“Black and blood” is the catchphrase for this book…

And those tattoos…!

What do you think?

I think I can’t wait for Dec 6!

First Mage Hiding - On Sale Now

I have to say: I love this cover SO MUCH. I saw it and had to have it… and it gave me the perfect way to rebrand my Crowns Peak series, because I did those covers myself and they… well, they were’t the best.

In face, they sucked.

But they were the best I could do at the time, and they served their purpose. Now I can do better.

I hope this beautiful cover will help more people find this series - I want to share Ava’s stories with everyone who is or could become my reader. So - if you already own Creeper, please don’t buy First Mage Hiding

Unless you really love the cover.

I do.

Writers of the Future - Golden Pen Award Oct 2021

So there was this event. In Hollywood. Right next to the Eternals world premier… no, not that event, our event - Writers and Illustrators of the Future:

I won the first quarter of 2021 - the large blue trophy… which included the conference, hotel, flights, and publishing in volume 37.

Then - what I wasn’t expecting and had totally talked myself into believing one of the others would win…

I won the ginormous red trophy too - Grand prize for the year - the Golden Pen Award.

There may have been shock… and tears. What a privilege and what an adventure! I just finished reading through the anthology and every story was amazing - I still can’t quite believe I won.

Storytime Blog Hop - April 2020 - A Ghost's Life

Free story time again!

This is one of the events that gets me writing even when I think I can’t, so I am grateful to be part of it. It’s a way to give back to my readers, even though I sometimes think it benefits me more than you… Don’t forget to scroll down for more free stories from authors around the world.


A Ghost’s Life

 

It was a dark and stormy night – don’t laugh at the cliché, dammit. It was! The kind that smells of rain and oil on tar, when the streetlights are out for blocks, and maybe there’s damp marijuana leaves leaning up against every other cinderblock fence even though the feds say it’s still illegal. I keep to myself, though, and expect the same courtesy, so everything else that happened was my own fault. In a way.

            Even though I’d walked through this neighborhood by myself for years, something in the air or the clouds or the side-eyes I was getting through broken blinds changed my mind. I tried to go back into the antique store, but the long-haired, long-skirted owner had already flipped the sign to closed and locked the door. An all-night gas station loomed on the corner, so I ran for it. I darted in the front door, threw back my wet hood, and—

            Bam. Everything went white. And then dark. Real dark.

 

***

 

When the lights came back on, the coroner zipped the body bag up over my face.

            “NO!” I screamed, jerking right out of my own body into the cool night air. Only it no longer felt cool. Or damp. Or much like anything. Nobody noticed me… well, new me. No-body me. They didn’t even spare much of a look for old me once it was in the bag.

            “Was one of them Yazzie boys, same as last week,” the clerk told the cops. “They’re in here stealing beer all the damned time. That oldest boy, he ain’t killed no one before. Girl came busting in the front door and he got spooked and he shot her. Then he grabbed his beer and took off.”

            Black spots filled my vision despite being recently dead. I sat down on a box of beer and put my head between my knees, hands tunneling into my hair. My dad was going to be pissed. I hyperventilated for a minute, then gave it up when I couldn’t feel the air in my lungs. So far, being dead sucked.

            Concentrating really hard, I swiped my hand at the display of chocolate candy. 

Nothing.

            So I jumped into the cop’s body. Slid right through and ended up ass-over-teakettle on the peeling laminate floor. Damn Hollywood didn’t get anything right.

            And still no one looked.

 

***

 

            When the cop handed over a business card and stomped out the front door, I followed. Why not? Maybe he was on his way to confront my killer. He climbed into the front seat of his police interceptor and rubbed his whiskered face while his partner plopped into the front passenger seat with a sigh. I slid through the back door into the prisoner seat, my second time in a cop car. Why didn’t I fall through the seat to the road? Why did the movies make ghosting look so easy? And where was my bright light, or spirit guide, or higher power or whatever to answer all these questions?

            We pulled up to a shitty World War II-era home—red brick and small windows with  “Yazzie” in those peel-and-stick letters on the mailbox next to the numbers, and dead grass with live weeds decorated by broken beer bottles glinting in the bare bulb of the front porch light. One cop went to the fence on the side of the house and peeked through the gaps while the other pounded on the cracked wood of the doorframe.

            I slid right on through.

            Behind the door was a bare living room with more beer bottles, a broken-down couch, a massive TV, and still-cool stolen beer half-drunk on the floor.

            And a heroin-skinny guy with prison tats, his bony hand wrapped around a huge black gun.

            I never moved so fast in my life, then I realized he wasn't pointing the gun at me, but at the door, and the cop behind it.

            "Oh, hell no!" He already killed me, I wasn't going to let him kill anyone else.

            Dude flinched.

            He could hear me?

            I waved my hand.

            "I killed you," he whispered, side-eyeing me but shakily keeping the gun trained on the front door. "I can't see you cause I killed you."

            Hah! He could see me. Sliding between him and the unsuspecting cop on the other side, I started talking a mile a minute. "Did you kill me? Huh? Then what am I doing here? Oh, and thanks for that, by the way. Like I didn't have a life for plans or--" I swallowed quick. No time to think of that now. He wasn't going to kill a cop. Not if I could stop him.

             “You can’t talk to me. You’re dead.” Now that gun was really shaking, wavering all over the place.

            "Leland Yazzie!" the cop yelled. "I know you're in there. I can hear you. Open the door!"

            "Leland, huh?" I got right up in his face and he backed up a step, the gun dipping down to my knees. "You ruined my life, Leland. You think I can ruin yours?"

            "Stop talking!"

            Sounded like an invitation to me, so I kept at him, backing him up step by step and watching his eyes get wider and wilder until--

            Bam.

            Everything went white, but this time it was me, spinning in the path of that bullet, spinning to steal its power, spinning to keep it from hitting the cop who was turning the doorknob.

            I dunno how, but it worked.

            The bullet curved and hit the hinges side of the door, then stuck instead of going right through. The cop pointed his own gun at Leland instead of getting shot. And Leland Yazzie dropped to the floor, dropped the gun, and wailed his guts out, begging for forgiveness and babbling about ghosts.

            I smiled.

            Guess I had something to do after all.

           


Storytime Blog Hop - January 2020 - SISTERS

Can you believe it’s 2020? That seems like a made-up number, like the year almost all the movies referred to as the future, and now it’s here. Welcome to a new year and a new decade! To tie us back into our old lives, I’m participating in the blog hop again. As a reminder, several of us writers from around the world share free flash fiction (under 1000 words) on our blogs. I hope you enjoy my contribution, and don’t forget to click on the links at the bottom to read the other stories -


Sisters

 

Sometimes being the middle sister isn’t all it’s rumored to be. They say I’m the forgotten one. The calm one. The peacemaker.

Only in my family it seems like I’m never forgotten. Everyone comes to me for advice, expecting me to keep the peace, even if I just want to scream.

Like now.

My older sister and my younger sister had been arguing since dawn. The older was used to getting her own way, since she’d been our babysitter since she was old enough to work the stove. The younger was used to getter her own way, since she’d been spoiled by our parents as their baby.

Instead of screaming, I used the pains in my body like the kind of scrying magic they’d become. Older sister first. I turned my attention to her, chafing my left hand around the shooting pain in my right wrist. “Lissa, what I hear you saying is that you like this guy. This Rodrigo. He’s always courteous, always listens to what you have to say?”

She glared at our younger sister, tossing her long, dark hair over one shoulder. She hadn’t said exactly that, of course, but she’d hinted toward it, and the pain told me I was right. “Yes.”

Now the younger. The low throbbing in my back. “Charlie, you like Rodrigo too? He buys you pretty trinkets? Makes you feel special?”

She glared right back at Lissa, running her hands through her short, dark hair. Same with her: hints, but I was right again. “Yes.”

Why the hell had they started dating the same man? What were they thinking? What was he thinking?

“And Rodrigo?” A sharp, stabbing pain in my left eye. “Who does he favor?”

Both of them looked shocked, then contrite, and the pain in my eyes grew into a burn as they chorused together, “…you.”

“Me?”

No. They weren’t serious.

Like most people with some variety of arthritis, I hurt worst in the morning and at night, and, like some, it had spread from my knees to my toes, ankles, hips, shoulders, elbows, wrists, fingers… really, it was easier to explain what didn’t hurt.

My particular variety meant I struggled right after I got up from sitting or lying down. It sometimes took as long as ten minutes for the pain to subside so I could walk almost without a limp. It limited me, but was also hidden.

No one stared when I went out. No one pointed, or giggled, or harassed me. No one gave up their seat, either, or were careful not to jostle me. Even when the not-quite visions came along with the pain. I had used them a few times in public to say just enough to get me some space, but mostly now I only used them with my family. The ones who wouldn’t look at me like I was crazy.

Well, maybe a little, but I was their crazy, so that made it okay.

“Me?” I asked again.

“He says you’re not as quiet as you look,” Lissa said. “He said he’s heard you scream.”

No one has heard me scream.

“He says you’re smart, and funny, and thoughtful,” Charlie growled. “Not spoiled. He said he met you online years ago and has been in love with you ever since.”

No one has ever been in love with me.

I couldn’t imagine it. “But—”

Lissa sighed. “He’ll be kind to you,” she said. “I asked him out, and he was too kind to say no. It’s always been you.”

Charlie paced, then turned with a shrug. “He’ll treat you like you’re special,” she said. “I asked him, too, before I knew he was dating Lissa. He’s always been more interested in you than in me, but he treated me so good… I didn’t want to let him go.”

I stared at them both, back and forth like a silent tennis match without the players. Or the ball. Okay, bad analogy. “You… think I should date him?”

“You should give him a chance.” Lissa nodded decisively. “We could help you get ready.”

“I texted him,” Charlie said smugly. “He’s on his way.”

“But—”

“Are you hurting?” Lissa demanded. “Do you need your meds?”

Charlie bit her lip. “He can bring you back early if this doesn’t work out.”

If we’d been friends online for years, there was only one person it could be. The man I knew as RinTin, and if it was him… He’d heard me scream through text. He knew me better than anyone. Maybe…

My sisters cared so much about me. I realized that for the first time in a very long time, I wasn’t hurting so much. Maybe this would be okay.

Charlie waved her phone. “He’s here. Go!”


Rogue Ring by Katharina Gerlach

Grim Failures by Bill Bush

Secrets by Gina Fabio

The Daughter of Disappearing Creek by Karen Lynn

The Gynnos Seeker Project by Juneta Key 

Mugging Morpheus by Vanessa Wells

Shores of Lamentation, by Melanie Drake

Syrojax Lends a Claw by Nic Steven

Culture Sharing by Angela Wooldridge

Storytime Blog Hop - October 2019 - Traveler

Welcome back to the blog hop! This month’s story turned out a little farther along the dark side of the horror spectrum than I intended, but Happy Halloween anyway!

The AUDIO version of some of our blog hop stories will be on the amazing podcast Alone in a Room with Invisible People, for your listening pleasure.

Don’t forget to scroll to the bottom of the page for links to the other blog hop stories!

Enjoy -


Traveler 

 

Time for Kispara was not safe, not full, not quiet; time ticked like a bad watch with every breath she took, and the cacophony of paused time was even worse with the breath she held.

*** 

They had cajoled her from her hospital bed, when she was weak and nauseated from her most recent bout of chemo, promising to make her special, promising to make her better, promising to make her happy.

In the fullness of time, she had discovered they had lied.

They had healed her, sort-of, giving her neon-colored I.V. goop that had burned until she gained her appetite and her coordination and her strength back; giving orders with errands to run for them when time stopped between her breaths until she couldn’t remember if she was coming or going; giving her sedatives and locked doors until she finally realized how trapped she was.

Until she held her breath and ran down the corridors through the time-frozen bodies, her lungs burning, her ears bleeding. Until she burst out of the building, gasped, then held her breath and ran again. Until she lost herself in the warren of the bad part of the city where no one noticed the hitch in her stride or the blood on her shirt.

She braved the hollow, screaming space between breaths long enough to steal a black hoodie, then sneak on board a bus bound for the border, choosing a seat next to a dish-water blonde with a shiner and a similar need not to be noticed. They spent a few hours in companionable silence, then escaped each other’s presence for a new slum in a new city.

 There, she learned she could steal sandwich meats and pizza slices and the occasional bao if she could hold her breath and ignore the noise long enough, but she couldn’t eat for hours after. She could walk into a pawn shop, scoop up some bracelets, and be gone before they knew, but she couldn’t sell them or trade them because all the fences knew each other, and not her. She could watch any woman she wanted, and dream of their lips touching, but she could never approach one, convinced she might be from the agency that didn’t exist, hunting her.

Most of all, she couldn’t escape herself.

Her guilt that her family thought her dead, and would be endangered if they discovered her alive.

Her regrets that she didn’t have the courage to become more than she was.

Her shame for the choices she’d made.

So Kiss kept breathing, kept surviving, and let time tick on.

It would end soon enough.


More stories::


Evening
by Karen Lynn

Man Of Your Dreams by Gina Fabio

The Undertaker's Daughter by J. Q. Rose

The Road by Elizabeth McCleary

Family Time by Bonnie Burns

The Exception by Vanessa Wells

Number 99 by Juneta Key

Edda’s Second Chance by Katharina Gerlach

Very Thin Line by Rebecca Anne Dillon

Henry Moves House by Nic Steven

For The Ghost The Bell Tolls by James Husum

Never Alone by Melanie Drake

The Neighbor by Meghan Collins

Storytime Blog Hop by Raven O'Fiernan

Loney Lucy by Bill Bush

Storytime Blog Hop by C. T. Bridges

Storytime Blog Hop by Warp World Books

Storytime Blog Hop July 2019 - Tears and Toil

It’s that time again - time for flash fiction from around the world. Established authors, up-and-comings, and yours-truly, all sharing in a blog hop for your pleasure. Don’t forget to scroll to the bottom to find the links for the other stories!


Tears and Toil

 

They’d been walking down the stairs into the furniture store bargain basement one minute, the girl, her father, and her new stepmother, and walking up into mist and magic the next.

Obsidian gates opened for the woman, and as the three crossed through, the woman’s plain off-the-rack black suit changed into a flowing black gown shot through with diamonds, and her hair and lips changed from wine to blood.

Star looked at her step-mother and realized she was the queen of this place—wherever it was—and looked at the starry sky above her and looked at her father.

Her father was gazing at his bride as if he could see no other. “I will build you a garden,” he swore. “To show my love for you. The perfect garden.”

The queen nodded, and so the contract was made. The man became the gardener, pouring his life into the soil and seeds, and when he came too close to perfect, the queen ripped out trees and bushes and flowers and left them roots-up and weeping.

When the child could stand being forgotten no longer, she hid herself inside a bag of trash and escaped the starry night and obsidian walls for the mists, where she survived and fought and learned, and when the invitations went out, she was ready.

Dressed in dawn-colored tatters, she presented herself at the gates with the others and was permitted to enter. 

She found him in the farthest corner of the garden, a stone man hemmed in by fading iridescent black ropes of magic, hunched over a raised flowerbed, and she despaired. He still lived, or the old, thick bindings would have faded to nothing, but had she come too late?

*

“By blood and bone and tears and toil fairly given,” she chanted. “By seeds and shoots and blooms and soil long nourished. By honor, by word, by blood, your contract is fulfilled.”

The stone figure shuddered and chips of granite flaked away from his eyes.

Then a man slid out of the stone, leaving a hollow husk behind, and stepped away from the flowerbed. He stooped more than she remembered, and his face fell into lines of concentration, but when he smiled, she saw her father.

“Papa?”

He squinted. One hand reached for her hair, but stopped before touching. “Star?”

“I was,” she said, forcing herself to be still, to give him time. “I am Dawn now.”

“You… freed me.”

She scowled. “You freed yourself. You kept your promise and more. She allowed her garden to finally be perfect. I just said the words.”

He stilled, and for an instant she worried that he had become stone again. “Why today?” he growled.

Trembling—in anger and fear—she pointed. “She weds another today. She wanted the garden perfect for her wedding guests.”

Anger rose in him, flushing his face and brightening his eyes. “And you?” he said coldly. “Are you one of her guests?”

“How else could I get in and out again?” Her lip quivered. “Today is the only day she has allowed free passage in and out of her realm since I escaped.”

He softened. “You came for me.”

Lifting her chin, she said, “You completed your contract with her. You swore to make her the perfect garden and you have. I came to ask you to fulfill your contract with me. Leave her. Be my father again and let me be your daughter. Love me and no one else until I am ready.”

She watched him, under his second wife’s starry skies, the man who used to be stone, and before that the gardener, and before that her father, and saw the magic bindings rise out of his body and hover over him. She’d guessed right. At some point, he had promised to love her, and now all that contract needed was a renewal.

But a shadow crept across her mind, dark and sharp. Am I doing to him what she did?

“Wait,” she said.

*

“Daughter?” He shook his head as if flies buzzed in his ears. “What’s wrong?”

“I won’t make you my slave.” She bit her lip. “I won’t bind you like she did.”

“You…?”

“Living in the mists,” she said, gesturing to the obsidian wall, “I learned to see magic bindings, and what I just asked you… I won’t. I won’t make you mine the way she made you hers.”

Moving slowly enough to allow her to flee if she wished, he took her in his arms and held her as he had not held her since they’d descended those stairs so long ago. “You are mine,” he said simply. “My daughter, my blood, my hero. I owe you your childhood, and I will stay with you as long as you need.”

Something broken inside her healed.

Even from behind her closed eyelids, she could see bright threads of gold wrap them both. With the threads came obligation, yes, but with both parties’ understanding and willing acceptance of the terms, also joy.

When she was ready, he released her, and she wiped her eyes, and they walked through the gardens together, a tall, hunched man gone gray from years of service, and a child with dawn-colored hair and dawn-colored tatters.

They walked past the queen in her ice-froth dress, and her new, dazed husband already being leeched of magic by his bride. They walked past the guests of all shapes and sizes, glitzed and glamored and glorious. They walked past the guards who were bound by the queen’s word not to stop them.

Outside the obsidian gates, outside the queen’s realm, the starry sky changed to gray mist, and the man faltered.

“Don’t worry, Papa,” the girl said, twisting the magic all around them.

He swallowed. “How can I worry with my daughter by my side?”

Dawn smiled at him and clutched his hand, and together they walked into her realm, into the light.


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Coming Soon:, by Karen Lynn

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I – The Magician, by Raven O’Fiernan

Evening Update, by Elizabeth McCleary

Allies, by Eli Winfield

The Salem Witch Trials and What We Can Learn From Them by Amaliz Tenner, Class 4c, by Katharina Gerlach

The Fairest, by Nic Steven

Something About Mary, by Bill Bush

Grumpy Old Harpies, by Juneta Key

The Goddess of Wine, by Vanessa Wells

A Melody in A Grotto, by S S Prince

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Revisiting an Old Friend

Having just moved my site, I had to go back and fix broken links to all my books on Holly Lisle’s forums … while I was doing that, I reread all my old blurbs and remembered just how fun Creeper was to write. It was my first… second completed novel (and the first shall never see the light of day, though it was great therapy at the time!)

It has magic and slavers and a reluctant heroine, and I thought I knew the ending until I wrote it and kept going.

A good reminder when I’m struggling that I might think I know the ending, but if I can just keep going I can write an even better story.

Have you discovered something similar?